![]() All in all, not at all deserving of a 5, let alone a 4 or 3. The translation is fine, but could use an editor and is a little confusing at times. Fewer levels with clearer dividing lines, that's what it should have been. Subdividing the apprentice level into like six unnecessary sublevels is counterintuitive. He kills someone, has to flee somewhere else and like ten chapters later he kills another person he shouldn't have killed. He always meets the special people gets nice stuff, lucks out on everything. Every ring or similar item he gets is a special item. The focus is on action and ramming through some of the. In general, characters don't get fleshed out. He meets the first what I presume to be love interest, and they instantly bond, trust each other and party up together. I mean it's fine, I've read worse, but it's not well written and the beginning of the plot is very disconcerting.Ĭharacter progression is quickly handled at the start, and then forgotten. This isn't a very good novel so far, and it probably won't improve. ![]()
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